Threat Neutralized
By Linda Patton ~July 5, 2015
The day finally came.
I waited for Ziggy to arrive, standing in the kitchen, knife in hand, with the
terror from the previous night laid on the cutting board, awaiting its doom.
He walked cautiously
up to the counter, held by his leash, stretching his tiny body as far as he
could manage, to get the offender in sight. Rachel reached down and picked him
up, holding him closely to the threat. His ears perked up, his eyes danced, and
his body tensed as he gazed at the watermelon.
He tilted his head as
if to say “What is this? Why is Grammy standing so close? What is that thing in
her hand? ” He never raised his voice, he only watched.
I placed the knife at
the end of the green skin and sliced. Ziggy froze, his ears perked and his eyes
grew larger, as the end fell from the juicy watermelon, revealing a red colored
flesh, slightly rolling from the pressure.
Suddenly his demeanor
changed, his body loosened, and we noticed something so intriguing that it made
us both stop to watch. His lips parted,
and an obvious smile crossed his face. His tongue was hanging slightly out of
his mouth, not in the way in which a dog would beg for food or attention, in a
way that showed sheer pleasure.
He remembered that
watermelon. It had scared him so badly the night before that it left him
barking for what seemed like hours. Grammy had captured and was now executing
the menace. He watched intently as slice after slice fell from what had once
been a very unusual ball.
Rachel took a piece
of the red flesh and held it down for him to eat, but he gently sniffed, then
refused. Satisfied simply by the fact that the threat had been neutralized.
This is a very good, entertaining story. I enjoyed reading it and I could visualize the dog being afraid of the watermelon and the ears perked up and his eyes dancing around. You did an outstanding job of writing were the audience had no choice but to visualize what you were saying. Thank you for writing this awesome post!
ReplyDeleteThank you Megan.
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